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By the Ticking of Your Heart

~A piece of steampunk flash fiction inspired by Edgar Allen Poe’s The Tell-tale Heart~

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Tick, tock, tick, tock

It was getting faster. I took a deep breath, trying to slow my heart rate. He was only a few feet away, his frock coat blending into the dark alley. I rolled my fingers on the handle of my folding blade, then in two fast steps lunged forward.

The man whirled, his hand connecting hard with my cheek. My back smacked into the brick wall, and his walking-stick sword pressed into my throat.

“Yield,” I grunted.

He stepped back, and the walls around us dissolved into the ground. I glared at the one-way mirror walls, refusing to look at my teacher.

“How did you know I was coming?” I asked.

“How are you feeling?” Randall asked in return.

“Fine. How—”

He snapped his fingers. “Run the simulation again.”

A hiss of the holographic mist was his answer. As the walls began forming around us, Randall said, “By the ticking of your heart, Jon. That’s how I knew.”

I ground my teeth. I would win this—then…

Tick, tock, tick, tock.

“You might try to not think about really killing me—it might keep your heart quieter.”

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About H. A. Titus

H. A. Titus, a self-admitted word nerd, lives on the shores of Lake Superior with her meteorologist husband. She lives most of the day in an imaginary land or with her nose stuck in a book. Occasionally her husband manages to pull her into the real world long enough for an exciting adventure such as jetskiing or snowmobiling. She began writing at age 8. At age 12, she discovered The Lord of the Rings Trilogy, became a fantasy nerd, and never looked back. She writes stories set in fantasy, science fiction, urban fantasy, and steampunk worlds. H. A. Titus is currently rewriting/editing her fantasy novel, Half Blood, as well as working on numerous novellas in science fantasy and urban fantasy genres.

One comment on “By the Ticking of Your Heart

  1. A nicely amusing little bit! Thanks for sharing.

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